Tuesday, April 2, 2013

Baby boy

Bright and brilliant
The day dawned,
Beautifully unblemished
And beyond belief, stayed.

Boldly branded as
Best among the betters
Brought a brand new
Bundle of bliss

In honor of my li’l nephew


  1. Wow, really goes with the B theme! Welcome to the A to Z Challenge!

  2. Like the first poem in this challenge, you bring the power of life out in your words. :)

  3. Beautiful! Abundant with 'B's, and simply sublime.

    (One tiny suggestion: a comma in the fourth line - "And, beyond belief...")

    But beyond that quibble, a brilliant "B" entry.


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