Started off with 'a poem a day' for NaPoWriMo 08, now onward to further endeavors!
Ooh, your tyburn is really good. Did you change shining to shiny on purpose? Otherwise, you captured the essence of this Monday Mural in a short poetic form well. I really like this. Have a nice day.
thanks Michelle,It was a typo - an autofill by word - changed it!!!
wow, that is very creative!!!... two in one... loved the format and style of words... complemented the photo well!!!
actually this is beautiful, the last two lines are superb...
Thank you for reading; and thank you in advance for the feedback
Ooh, your tyburn is really good. Did you change shining to shiny on purpose? Otherwise, you captured the essence of this Monday Mural in a short poetic form well. I really like this. Have a nice day.
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ReplyDeleteIt was a typo - an autofill by word - changed it!!!
wow, that is very creative!!!... two in one... loved the format and style of words... complemented the photo well!!!
ReplyDeleteactually this is beautiful, the last two lines are superb...
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