Thursday, August 25, 2011

Drenched in quiet

In the serene blues
aware of my every breath
swimming with the fish
Penned by at
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousSaturday, August 27, 2011 8:21:00 PM

    Oh this is lovely I can imagine this lovely swim!

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  2. Judith C EvansSaturday, August 27, 2011 8:31:00 PM

    Love "serene blues"...this haiku conveys such tranquility!

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  3. Cassiopeia RisesMonday, August 29, 2011 5:47:00 PM

    Oh, liked this one very much.


    Melanie

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  4. Vinay Leo R.Wednesday, August 31, 2011 2:14:00 AM

    Its like deep sea diving! :) Wonderful food for the imagination of your readers!

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