Started off with 'a poem a day' for NaPoWriMo 08, now onward to further endeavors!
Monday, July 21, 2008
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Three birds of a feather, Vagaries they weather, Musical notes tied together, On beauty & melody, they tether, Tunes so soft, they don't smother, Pausing to take a breather Come closer, come hither, Soon, before the songs wither!
Just Someone that's really good. On beauty & melody, they tether, is my favorite line. I also like the way you broke the rhyming up in the middle of this piece. Nice job. Have a nice night.
Just Someone that's really good. On beauty & melody, they tether, is my favorite line. I also like the way you broke the rhyming up in the middle of this piece. Nice job. Have a nice night.
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