Wednesday, May 6, 2009

Grouch!

Though it can change in a flash,
Cryptic she was to be today,
In a mood to malign, she was.
Penned by at
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13 comments:

  1. Thom GabrukiewiczWednesday, May 06, 2009 3:32:00 PM

    I like this a lot. But I've wondering if it would read better the last line as "In a mod to malign, she was."

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  2. Anya PadyamWednesday, May 06, 2009 4:10:00 PM

    Thank you ThomG; updated and yes, it reads much better! was struggling with it a bit...

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  3. anthonynorthWednesday, May 06, 2009 5:35:00 PM

    I think we've all been there. Nicely done.

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  4. Andy SewinaWednesday, May 06, 2009 5:46:00 PM

    Phew, I hope she changes, before she catches me!

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  5. Linda JacobsWednesday, May 06, 2009 6:10:00 PM

    I think some of my students wrote this! LOL!

    Great!

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  6. LucyWednesday, May 06, 2009 7:09:00 PM

    so much in so few words! nice! well NOT nice but I meant your poem was nice!

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  7. AmarettogirlWednesday, May 06, 2009 7:39:00 PM

    I wish i had this on a stickie note or t-shirt to wear out on days I feel exactly the same way! Perfect use of the words!

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  8. ~willow~Wednesday, May 06, 2009 10:40:00 PM

    Excellent! Captures very well the different moods, or persons, we choose to be (or wake up being) from day to day.

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  9. PJDThursday, May 07, 2009 1:22:00 AM

    Yoda's wisdom shines always. I wonder what got Leia so torqued?

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  10. MojoThursday, May 07, 2009 9:33:00 AM

    Ah, the secret pleasure of being vicious with your tongue. I loved this.

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  11. AngelThursday, May 07, 2009 7:29:00 PM

    I think she might know the lady I wrote about today...lol.

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  12. ULFriday, May 08, 2009 8:53:00 AM

    perfect grouch :)

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  13. one more believerSaturday, May 09, 2009 3:37:00 PM

    i absolutely love it!!.. i agree with aa... it'd make an excellent t-shirt...

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