Started off with 'a poem a day' for NaPoWriMo 08, now onward to further endeavors!
sad, full of hopelessness, I guess there's no thing as being happy when someone is goneI like the way you break the words, sort of read it as pauses that also mirrors his life
Wow, chilling. Wonderful in its sadness.
This is nice - I like the first three lines the best... Death is not for the timid... nope, that's for sure!
Phew, life isn't easy and death's even tougher!
my feeling with this is that the departed isn't regretful at all about the life he lead, it is those he left behind, in the dreary, dismal despair. well done! -Meg
Those who think death is easy, don't know much!timid embrace forces out dreary thoughts
Thank you for reading; and thank you in advance for the feedback
sad, full of hopelessness, I guess there's no thing as being happy when someone is gone
ReplyDeleteI like the way you break the words, sort of read it as pauses that also mirrors his life
Wow, chilling. Wonderful in its sadness.
ReplyDeleteThis is nice - I like the first three lines the best... Death is not for the timid... nope, that's for sure!
ReplyDeletePhew, life isn't easy and death's even tougher!
ReplyDeletemy feeling with this is that the departed isn't regretful at all about the life he lead, it is those he left behind, in the dreary, dismal despair. well done! -Meg
ReplyDeleteThose who think death is easy, don't know much!
ReplyDeletetimid embrace forces out dreary thoughts