There shall never be,
A lurch in my step,
All I need is you,
To give me a good grip.
There shall never be,
A frantic fear in my mind,
All I need is you,
To lend a hand with the grind.
There shall never be,
A tear in my eye,
All I need is you,
To steady me, to get by.
There shall only be,
The sweet odor of success,
All I need is you,
To help me under duress.
There shall only be,
A whole lot of love,
All I need is you,
To share, my love!
There shall only be,
A repeat of these years,
All I need is you,
For nine million more years!
On the eve of our anniversary, here is to you, my love!
Lovely poem, and the repetition works well.
ReplyDeleteIt must be love.
ReplyDeleteHope you get your wish.
The repetition works for me, too. It gives the poem a songlike quality.
ReplyDeleteGreat, you should ask Bruce Springsteen to convert this to a nice song.
ReplyDeleteA nicely tuned lyrical piece. Soft and gentle.
ReplyDeleteSweet and rhythmic...lovely!
ReplyDeleteHow lucky are you? Inspiration like that AND the skill to put its light across. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteShades of John Lennon here!
ReplyDeleteLovely!
i like the repetition..
ReplyDeleteHere is my 3WW post!
aww this is perfect for Valentines Day - nice feel to it.
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