Wednesday, February 3, 2010

All I need is you...

There shall never be,
A lurch in my step,
All I need is you,
To give me a good grip.

There shall never be,
A frantic fear in my mind,
All I need is you,
To lend a hand with the grind.

There shall never be,
A tear in my eye,
All I need is you,
To steady me, to get by.

There shall only be,
The sweet odor of success,
All I need is you,
To help me under duress.

There shall only be,
A whole lot of love,
All I need is you,
To share, my love!

There shall only be,
A repeat of these years,
All I need is you,
For nine million more years!

On the eve of our anniversary, here is to you, my love!

10 comments:

  1. Lovely poem, and the repetition works well.

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  2. It must be love.
    Hope you get your wish.

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  3. The repetition works for me, too. It gives the poem a songlike quality.

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  4. Great, you should ask Bruce Springsteen to convert this to a nice song.

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  5. A nicely tuned lyrical piece. Soft and gentle.

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  6. How lucky are you? Inspiration like that AND the skill to put its light across. Nice work.

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  7. aww this is perfect for Valentines Day - nice feel to it.

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