Wednesday, March 10, 2010

A ray of radiance

As today, unveils, slowly,
Its a day, bright and jolly!
Five glowing candles on the cake,
A special day, of today, you make!

“Awesome” in every way, you are,
Nothing short of a rock star!
Every day, a new landmark,
On your journey, as you embark.

Obedient, you are, in your way
Well thought out, always you say!
Nothing in you, we would modify,
You are just the best, we can’t deny!

Like a ray of sunshine, you dazzle,
Never stumped by any puzzle.
You never cease to amaze,
May you be this way, always!

A birthday to remember, dear little one!
May it be just as much fun!


  1. Lovely words and hopes for your little one.

  2. The day and your little one, both rock stars! How I love the energy of this one! Lovely, luscious, luminous, lively and loveable....

  3. I love the brightness of your poem and the love that you shower on your little one. Enjoy the day.

  4. It's nice reading such a happy piece about such a happy event. Enjoy the day.

  5. A precious piece, and happy birthday to your little one!

  6. What a future gift to your five year old - to look back and see this created today. Happy Birthday rock star!

  7. Five-year-olds are full of magic and promise. What fun - lovely poem!

  8. birthday cake and blowing out candles is everything!!!

  9. Wonderful piece!

    My 3ww:

  10. appreciate your words. nice find.

    Happy Belated Birthday.



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