Monday, June 30, 2008

Branched

Monday Mural

Looking into my palms,
I see my unending qualms,
In the mirror, I detect,
Self doubt, begins to infect.

As I branch out, growing,
Taking root, as life is slowing,
The arm is broad and strong,
sending fears to where they belong.

Lasting I hope, I can be,
Giving to all, like the tree,
Head held high, forever,
In the face of adversities, I endure.

4 comments:

  1. love the transition from negative to positive.

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  2. What a strong position your poem takes. I love the transition from hardship to living. Very nice. Have a nice day.

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  3. must compliment you on yr rhymnes... so subtle... the arm is broad and strong... great stuff!!!

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