Tuesday, June 30, 2009

Adore, not abhor

The red rose whispers of passion,
A slow murmur of vivacity and verve,
The urge for love attains satiation,
The contented sigh shan’t unnerve!

And the white rose breathes love,
The wheeze of life meant to persist,
Adoration abounds, seeks to prove,
Over loathe and revulsion, can desist.

7 comments:

  1. Adoration abounds, seeks to prove - love that line :)

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  2. Nice piece - it speaks of the variables of passion and love in a haunting way.

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  3. you say a lot in a few words. They stir my thoughts, my passions, They awake me.

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  4. I had to read this one too before I left. It is so pure and filled with different aspects of love. Good job.

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