Started off with 'a poem a day' for NaPoWriMo 08, now onward to further endeavors!
Wednesday, June 17, 2009
Rhythmic beauty
Rhythmic beauty With dazzling exterior, Rhythmic beauty Almost the stature of a deity, Arresting in its demeanor, None wicked, entirely ardor, Rhythmic beauty
Certainly like the feel of this one. Rhythmic beauty indeed.
ReplyDeleteYeah, there certainly is a rhythmic beauty here!
ReplyDeleteneat :-) I like the repetitions.
ReplyDeleteLovely - the repetition makes it sing!
ReplyDeletewhat beauty :D
ReplyDeleteMy 3WW
all it needs is a tune just as catchy!
ReplyDeleteRepetitions works so well!
ReplyDeletestolen from the air
Please don't forget to post your creative works at Monday Poetry Train Revisited too!
how nice...
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