Thursday, October 1, 2009

Riddle of life

Red and gory, is that me?
Or pure and holy as white?
Life shan’t be a series to me
Of paths of remorseful contrite.

Seek to never tread away,
From the chosen path of right,
Quietly I shall lead my life
With care to not be a trite!


4 comments:

  1. Oh, how I love the use of metrical verse... and with a dappled-with-color question...

    I like it, I like it....

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  2. life can certainly have it's own set of riddles for us to figure out. let's hope we can find the answers to our lives before the end. have a great night.

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  3. That you ask a question and provide no answer causes me to think. Which is a good thing.

    That you did so in such a lyrical, beauteous manner is all the more wonderful.

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