Wednesday, May 14, 2008

Outcome

Writing I was, at breakneck speed,
To nothing else, I was paying heed,
Time seemed to be running out,
I could hear kids playing about,
Blurry writing and scratched out papers,
Lighting was dim, with burning tapers,
I could see the results, below average,
I felt like, I was trapped in a cage,
An imminent exam and its nightmares,
I am beginning to pull out my hairs,
Its just a phase and it will pass,
And, tackle it, I will; hope to surpass!

8 comments:

  1. this makes me feel like i am swirling... so much going on and moving ever so fast!!! very nice!!

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  2. Exams do have such effect on us!

    :D

    lost to taxes

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  3. Really nice, I remember those days. You pick up the feelings perfectly.

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  4. Ah, those terrible, terrible exams. I used to hate them.

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  5. I agree with paisley - you almost can't catch your breath, which is what my experience with exams was usually like!

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  6. I am so glad those days are over! You captured the frenzy so well!

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  7. I love the intensity, the kind of scattered thoughts. Very realistic.

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  8. oh wow. i havent had that feling in a while. i miss exams. in a strange way. :)

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