Bright sun shone,
Brought a warm feeling,
Buzzing bees drone,
Buds open, layers peeling.
A glowing transformation,
When trees come alive,
After the winter gestation,
In spring they all thrive.
Seasons come and go,
Nature is faithful as ever,
Putting on the best she can show,
Break the cycle, she does never.
Nature leaves her sign,
Like the artist, who is famed.
She weaves her intricate design,
That he in his picture, once framed.
I like the image of a woven design. Beautiful piece. God bless.
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By looking at BOTH of your blogs, I found this post ... which mentions both "framed" and "Weekend Wordsmith" ... so I'll link my readers to this post.
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I like the way you think: "What reason do you have to believe the earth is flat?" And your answer: "Because there is a book titled The world is flat."
I'm following Sandy around letting her do the thinking and agreeing with her tonight. I like the woven design image too. Nice poem.
ReplyDeletedelightful. I very much enjoyed the rhyming cadance.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem , particularly like the 'nature as an artist '. and what a masterpiece it creates.
ReplyDeleteNice poem, looking through your bloggage I'm impressed with the strict discipline that you've used and the different styles of poetry.
ReplyDelete"A glowing transformation,
ReplyDeleteWhen trees come alive,"
My favorite lines - I so relate to the feeling of trees being live, and the transformation that takes place in spring!
Love the poem. Especially the last stanza.
ReplyDeleteGreat use of all the prompts!
ReplyDeleteI like this a lot..
warm feelings
I like very poem. You got the warmth of spring just right.
ReplyDeleteit is a perfect picture of spring and all her glory... ahh, the last line that he in his picture once framed... great combo of the prompts too!
ReplyDeleteI strongly relate to "in spring they all thrive", nothing seems more alive than in Springtime!
ReplyDeleteVery well written, congratulations.
ReplyDeleteDeath to Winter! I join you in your celebration of Spring. Summer is where it all happens though. I like this poem, even though I usually don't enjoy a rhyme. I think it works good here, like a song.
ReplyDeleteHAPPY THURSDAY!