Friday, September 4, 2009

Inception...

Noisy surroundings
And copious commotion
Beginning of school

6 comments:

  1. From Therese B. at RWP -- 5/7/5 syllables and appropriate to the current season. I think, too, that lots of easvesdropping starts in school.

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  2. yes it does and this little poem reflects one pure version of that reality.
    Nice.

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  3. i remember all those whisperings and commotion of beginning school days. mykiah started back to school in August. hope all is well.

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  4. back to school haiku makes me happy! (mine got on their bus for the first day this year about an hour ago!!)

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  5. There was so much eavesdropping, name dropping and book dropping in school...

    Great poem.

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