Started off with 'a poem a day' for NaPoWriMo 08, now onward to further endeavors!
Wednesday, September 23, 2009
Stellar sadness
Eclipsed in sorrow, Waiting for penumbra of joy! Will I languish forever, In the umbra of melancholy? Orbit eternally, will I, In the phases of grief? From the velocity of life, I seek an occultation!
Heavy words. I never knew even shadows too had such characterization. And the way you portrayed the bondage and the will to be free from this grief is quite vivid. Heavy words indeed.
Heavy words.
ReplyDeleteI never knew even shadows too had such characterization.
And the way you portrayed the bondage and the will to be free from this grief is quite vivid.
Heavy words indeed.
~Harsha
Whirlwind of words. Nice one
ReplyDeletePowerful and emotional words. Nicely done.
ReplyDeletePowerful words..
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sadness and grief are definitely burdens to carry. sending hugs your way just in case you need one. have a great day.
ReplyDeletesome absolutely beautiful lines in this.
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful and powerful. Sometimes I ask myself those same questions.
ReplyDeletePoignant and melancholy. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteEven sadness can be beautiful, and this is proof. Great writing.
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