Wednesday, July 15, 2009

Drizzle

Sulking, the sky grieves,
Raindrops drip down the leaves,
A hypnotic daze surrounds,
In the wet and watery grounds,
Thus refreshes nature today,
For a fresh start, clears the way!

17 comments:

  1. I can't, for the life of me, can figure out why your posts always go straight to spam.

    But, hey, you do belong here. Another great poem.

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  2. This works well, in message and flow. Enjoyed it.

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  3. Great poem. Strong imagery. Rain has a way of refreshing things, doesn't it? Hope all is well. Have a great night.

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  4. love your poem far more than i love spam..

    wait, that didn't come out right, did it?

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  5. I like it, I like walking the streets after the rain has gone and see all that nature has left behind and your poem reminds me of those times, the rain is like you said in the poem, a fresh start

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  6. Ah, this has all the elements of lovely poetry. Imagery is terrific and the truth is refreshing and inspirational...

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  7. first the gloom and then the positive..rejoicing in nature! love this!

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  8. hey this flowed well! good imagery...

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  9. I always like to read you! And you do belong at 3WW!

    Like it!

    dragon rider

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  10. That was beautiful...such a beautiful way of starting afresh

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