Started off with 'a poem a day' for NaPoWriMo 08, now onward to further endeavors!
Wednesday, July 15, 2009
Drizzle
Sulking, the sky grieves, Raindrops drip down the leaves, A hypnotic daze surrounds, In the wet and watery grounds, Thus refreshes nature today, For a fresh start, clears the way!
I like it, I like walking the streets after the rain has gone and see all that nature has left behind and your poem reminds me of those times, the rain is like you said in the poem, a fresh start
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ReplyDeleteBut, hey, you do belong here. Another great poem.
This works well, in message and flow. Enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem. Strong imagery. Rain has a way of refreshing things, doesn't it? Hope all is well. Have a great night.
ReplyDeleteLove the rhymes!
ReplyDeletelove your poem far more than i love spam..
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Just lovely!
ReplyDeleteI like it, I like walking the streets after the rain has gone and see all that nature has left behind and your poem reminds me of those times, the rain is like you said in the poem, a fresh start
ReplyDeleteAh, this has all the elements of lovely poetry. Imagery is terrific and the truth is refreshing and inspirational...
ReplyDeletei love the rhyme scheme!
ReplyDeletegreat lines, great rhymes!
ReplyDeletefirst the gloom and then the positive..rejoicing in nature! love this!
ReplyDeletenice sounds!! love it!
ReplyDeleteFresh start indeed. Nice one,,,
ReplyDeletehey this flowed well! good imagery...
ReplyDeleteI always like to read you! And you do belong at 3WW!
ReplyDeleteLike it!
dragon rider
Well said.
ReplyDeleteThat was beautiful...such a beautiful way of starting afresh
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