Tuesday, July 14, 2009

NaiSaiKu (July 14, 2009)

It got me thinking,
How complex things can become,
My life as it is!
IT GOT ME THINKING,
My life as it is!
How complex things can become,
It got me thinking,

4 comments:

  1. I like this version of your naisaiku best. I think it shows the complexity of your life and how complex it could become for someone else. Have a great day.

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  2. Phew, I think you've got me thinking too!

    Many thanks for taking Ther NaiSaiKu Challenge?

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  3. I like the wraparound of this form for these complex circles. Well-done!!

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  4. Nice poetry. It sounds very clean and simple - yet the message is complex.

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