Started off with 'a poem a day' for NaPoWriMo 08, now onward to further endeavors!
Wednesday, July 22, 2009
Surpassed
A perfect diamond ring, Moon cradling the Sun Slowly and gently to be let go From its phenomenal snare, A morn swathed in darkness, Dawned not once, but twice, Swarms of people awaiting, A historical spectacle divine!
Ah the lunar Eclipse. Wish we could have seen it here in the U.S. great description. I would have loved to have seen it rise in India. what a spectical seeing a hole rise instead of the moon.
I think this is in reference to today's Eclipse...?
ReplyDeleteThis would have been great to witness in person, but you've fond the words to describe it.
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Beautifully described.
ReplyDeleteoh, how lovely!
ReplyDeleteI saw that on the news--did you get to see it in person?
If only I could've witnessed this in real life...you brought it to life with your words, though! Beautifully done.
ReplyDeleteyou have made it seem so mystical!
ReplyDeleteThat was great! I would loved to have seen it in person too.
ReplyDeleteI feel now like I actually saw it! Nice work!
ReplyDeleteWow! I wish I'd seen that too!
ReplyDeleteWow..
ReplyDeleteI am so glad you delurked on my site.. lovely poem.. Keep writing :-)
Beautiful write! Wonderful to read :)
ReplyDeleteI've watched an eclipse before, really cool. You've captured its essence well here. Did you get to see this in person? Have a great night.
ReplyDeleteHow very cool to see an eclipse-inspired poem! Yay!
ReplyDeleteperfect descriptions, love the beginning
ReplyDeleteAh the lunar Eclipse. Wish we could have seen it here in the U.S.
ReplyDeletegreat description.
I would have loved to have seen it rise in India. what a spectical seeing a hole rise instead of the moon.
i am catching this now...how beautiful...reminds of the two I have witnessed in life - once back home and once away...
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