Wednesday, April 16, 2008

Comfort




As a dark cloud descends,
With no silver lining visible
At a stage where sadness extends
And happiness isn't feasible
I try hard to make amends
But I seem to be invisible
In despair I trudge as I try to cope,
Touching my heart now is a ray of hope!!!

7 comments:

  1. I loved that last line and think you will love it here.

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  2. Glad to have found your poems. They truly reflect a wide array of thoughts. Great work.

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  3. thank you so muchh for this.. the words,, and that picture is amazing how it is light on one side of the rainbow and dark on the other,... wow...

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  4. Very nice! A ray of hope is such a wonderous happening!

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  5. It's not always easy to find a silver lining... but search long and hard enough and you will.

    Welcome to 3WW! :)

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  6. oh yes, it is so very comforting and serene, beautiful.

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