Sunday, April 20, 2008

Lost love

Walking away without a word
She watched him go aboard
A cry of plea almost escaped
As she stood, in her sorrows draped

Her composed self was eerie
To move away, she was weary
'Take me back' she silently mouthed
Her calmness now, she loathed

Here, she was in land of no return,
This was her loss to mourn
Peeling herself from the horizon,
She walked slowly toward the setting sun!


  1. interesting that she never actually voiced her fear of loss......

  2. very nice, i wish she didnt have to walk away...

  3. I've been enjoying your poetry here. :) I wanted to yell for her to stay!

    Thanks for stopping in.


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