Transient beauty
Painstakingly done
Forces of nature
In a flash, its undone.
Of life, its symbolic,
Its splendor forgone,
But life in it,
There is none.
With nothing,
It was begun,
Sculpted by hand,
Its magnificence will stun.
Glittering radiance,
As the sun shone,
Man made creation,
But is nature outshone?
Love your ending. is nature outshone? You've shared a nice perspective with your poem. Thanks for sharing it with us. Have a nice night.
ReplyDeletei agree with Michelle. That last question flings out a stirring challenge.
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nature sure outshows...full of truth...yes, that line is perfect, i agree with michelle and gemma.
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